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Some people fail in school but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

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Some individuals indeed do not excel in school yet succeed in their life. Have we not heard of many stories of failure people who have stood out of the
coud
a large number of things or people considered together
crowd
cold
cloud
? While a few children fail during their schooling
inspite
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in spite
 of being
intellegent
having the capacity for thought and reason especially to a high degree
intelligent
, their dedication and
hardwork
Suggestion
hard work
makes
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make
 them successful. There are few compelling reasons why a dull student makes an identity in the society.
Firstly
, the children might not be excellent in their
acedemics but
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academics, but
academics but
academic but
academies but
 they are more practical and productive.
Besides
, a bright student may just
byheart
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by heart
 for the sake of
exam but
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exam, but
 might not know the actual concepts.
Secondly
, the results do not matter as they are
succombed
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succumbing
succumbed
 to failures;
however they
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however, they
imbed
fix or set securely or deeply
embed
 the strategies to learn the subject. The
pre-eminent
greatest in importance or degree or significance or achievement
preeminent
 example is the CEO of Facebook, who is a University dropout, yet a well known entrepreneur.
Finally
, they tend to learn from the failures, which keeps them motivated.
Subsequently
, it makes them
prosperous
Suggestion
prosper
 in the long run.
Nevertheless
, there are a few enthralling grounds which
makes
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make
 them successful. The dedication which failures carry towards their goal not only makes them
rich but
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rich, but
also
 helps create an image in the
croud
to move or cause to move in a sinuous, spiral, or circular course
thread
code
.
Moreover
, their attitude towards achieving their tasks makes them responsible to chase their dreams. While one is striving for the end result, the hurdles in between do not play any role for failures,
instead
 the
perserverance
persistent determination
perseverance
 to reach the top creates history. A great example is Michael Phelps, who has worked hard in silence has amazed the world with a total of 28 medals in
Olympics
Suggestion
the Olympics
.
Therefore
, the commitment towards their goal makes them successful. In conclusion,
although
 few people neglect their academic scores, I believe their zeal and persistence drives them to be one among the
croud
a large number of things or people considered together
crowd
.

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