some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. what are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having large number of toys?

early stage

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the early stage

of a child, they usually need some toys to play which make them busy and helps to build up their memory because most of the toys are now based on science and technology. Few parents brought their kids a large amount of toys to play with, in order to make them feel happy.

This

essay will discuss about the pros and cons of having a large number of toys.

Firstly

, toys having gaming activities can help groom their brain as well as games can improve their

phenotics

the branch of biology that studies heredity and variation in organisms

genetics

fanatics

phonetics

, so that they can speak

more clear

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more clearly

and communicate with their parents easily. Having toys in large amount can make them busy in playing while

ladies

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the ladies

of the house can complete their household assignments at that time.

For example

, one of my

friend

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friends

gifted my niece a toy which can pronounce all the alphabets, which provided us with a great advantage that the little princess can speak more clearly and loudly. We saw the improvements in her vocal cords day by

day

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day, moreover

moreover

my sister can complete her work by the time she was playing.

On the other hand

, having large number of toys are disadvantageous

too because

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too, because

children get used to them and they start playing

immidiately

without delay or hesitation; with no time intervening

immediately

after bed, which will

definately

without question and beyond doubt

definitely

disturb their bed time schedule and apart from

this

the parents get worried about

thier

of them or themselves

their

health.Let me explain

this

with an example from my own

expirence

the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities

experience

experiences

, my child was fond of toys like cars, scooters, bikes and aeroplanes etc.

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had a huge collection of them so we bought him a big car on his birthday. On one day he was riding the car and met with a small accident, he

felt

cause to fall by or as if by delivering a blow

fell

down and got injured. After that

incident he

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incident, he

was no more interested in toys and all his toys are

now mere a

Suggestion

now a mere

waste of money. To conclude, providing children with more toys is both advantageous and disadvantageous. Parents should check if their kids really need them and should

also

observe the

usuage

the act of using

usage

usages

and manufacturing quality of the product to avoid any serious injury in future.

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