some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. what are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having large number of toys?

In
early stage
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the early stage
of a child, they usually need some toys to play which make them busy and helps to build up their memory because most of the toys are now based on science and technology. Few parents brought their kids a large amount of toys to play with, in order to make them feel happy.
This
essay will discuss about the pros and cons of having a large number of toys.
Firstly
, toys having gaming activities can help groom their brain as well as games can improve their
phenotics
the branch of biology that studies heredity and variation in organisms
genetics
fanatics
phonetics
, so that they can speak
more clear
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more clearly
and communicate with their parents easily. Having toys in large amount can make them busy in playing while
ladies
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the ladies
of the house can complete their household assignments at that time.
For example
, one of my
friend
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friends
gifted my niece a toy which can pronounce all the alphabets, which provided us with a great advantage that the little princess can speak more clearly and loudly. We saw the improvements in her vocal cords day by
day
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day, moreover
moreover
my sister can complete her work by the time she was playing.
On the other hand
, having large number of toys are disadvantageous
too because
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too, because
children get used to them and they start playing
immidiately
without delay or hesitation; with no time intervening
immediately
after bed, which will
definately
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
disturb their bed time schedule and apart from
this
the parents get worried about
thier
of them or themselves
their
health.Let me explain
this
with an example from my own
expirence
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
experiences
, my child was fond of toys like cars, scooters, bikes and aeroplanes etc.
he
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He
had a huge collection of them so we bought him a big car on his birthday. On one day he was riding the car and met with a small accident, he
felt
cause to fall by or as if by delivering a blow
fell
down and got injured. After that
incident he
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incident, he
was no more interested in toys and all his toys are
now mere a
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now a mere
waste of money. To conclude, providing children with more toys is both advantageous and disadvantageous. Parents should check if their kids really need them and should
also
observe the
usuage
the act of using
usage
usages
and manufacturing quality of the product to avoid any serious injury in future.
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