Nowadays people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are too many ills in the society.
Facebook
, along with many other popular social media channels have been blamed for the deteriorating culture of the young and old in the society. Many people believe the evils of social media should be stopped because it's more harmful than helpful to the citizenry. I totally disagree with
this
notion because these media sites are used as news sources and are
also
responsible for the quick transfer of knowledge and best practices amongst the younger generation.
First
, some people believe that social media
is
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have been
responsible for many recently published suicidal cases. While, it is true that
such
victims were active on social media, it is wrong to think that social media in itself was the reason for their actions.
For instance
, it is worthy of note that there are many
religious social
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religious, social
media addicts who spend so much time on the Internet teaching people how to live right.
Such
people cannot commit suicide
instead
it is people with low self esteem who look for help on the
Internet and
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Internet, and
when they don't get help resort to committing suicide.
Hence
, the Internet cannot be blamed for their decisions.
Also
, It is worthy of note that many recent household inventions are widely spread because of
Facebook
and Twitter. In
order
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
words, many young people have passed knowledge amongst themselves without physically meeting each other by simply posting new ideas and copy other people's ideas.
For instance
, many people learnt how to cook from social sharing sites like
Youtube
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YouTube
.
This
will not have been possible without social media. Again, social media sites
keeps
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keep
people abreast of happenings around them.
This
means that social media addicts are more likely to get news and current happenings around them as against those who don't visit social media sites.
For instance
,
Facebook
's news feeds have helped families get aware of dangers in their
neighborhoods
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhoods
which would have caused them their safety. The family was safe because they followed the happenings in their
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
in a live
Facebook
channel and so for these reasons I strongly disagree that social media sites are responsible for the ills in the society. In conclusion, though there have been several complaints about social media sites and its relationship to a downgrading community, I strongly disagree that these social media sites should be blamed.
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