Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper?

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Indeed, the information provided by reporters should be true without any contamination. Is the right message delivered? While few argue not all reports published are true and some debate that
media
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the media
is run by the influenced people, I believe the truth is not revealed completely.
To begin
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with, the media, which is the most successful business throughout the
world mainly
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world, mainly
,
focuses
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focus
on attracting people rather than delivering the right news.
Moreover
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, their only motto is ‘more the controversy, more the followers, because of which the people are afraid to face the media. They mainly target the celebrities and businessmen to grab the attention. The
pre-eminent
greatest in importance or degree or significance or achievement
preeminent
example is the downfall of famous football player Zidanine
Zidane who
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Zidane, who
was cornered for being rude to the referee.
Besides
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, the crime rate is growing rapidly knowing the fact that the media is corrupt, the fear of being penalized is deteriorated among law breakers.
Subsequently
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, the
truthfulness
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truth
in
news
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the news
is adulterated.
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, the main concept of a newspaper is not only to publish an article
instead
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, the right fact to be delivered to the citizens. As most of the people start their day by reading a newspaper or watch
news
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the news
on television, it is the basic responsibility of press to pass over the statistics to the believers. The people, after reading the articles in the paper get carried away with the emotion due to which the mindset may be disturbed.
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, the media should portray the facts without making any changes. Apart from
this
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, they are influenced mostly by the rich because of which, they are bribed easily making them succumb to alter the data.
Consequently
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, the main function of paper is compromised. In conclusion, I strongly believe,
although
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the information passed by the media or the press is eye catching, all
that is
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printed is not accurate.
Therefore
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, any news should be validated before it is accepted.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • objective reporting
  • subjective interpretation
  • media bias
  • misinformation
  • journalistic integrity
  • editorial standards
  • fact-checking
  • watchdog role
  • public opinion
  • newsworthy
  • ethical journalism
  • credible sources
  • press freedom
  • sensationalism
  • media literacy
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