Some people believe money is best gift for teenagers while others disagree.discuss both views and guve your opinion

Money

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is the most powerful thing for

everyone nomatter

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everyone, no matter

everyone no matter

which age group they belong to.

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Scores

of people have faith in that

youngesters

a young person of either sex

youngsters

should be given handsome amount as a present on their special days and

occassions

something you have to do

occasions

while on the other side of rope

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some folks believe

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that giving money

money

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is not a good idea

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for

the young

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younger

children.

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this

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This

essay will particularize and reel

off

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of

the facts and finding on the advantages and disadvantages of the

money

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on the children.

the

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The

latter part of the essay will reveal with

few example

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a few examples

few examples

that support my opinion that the young people

shouldnot

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should not

be given

cash

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as their present. In

this

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modern era

,

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,

solid

cash

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can bring the sky down.

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As

a matter of fact

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,

teenagers are more prone to the evil deeds of society because they are not able to

discrimnate

recognize or perceive the difference

discriminate

what is good for them and what could drag them into real trouble.

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On

the one hand

,

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,

giving presents is always momentous and impartial for our children

,

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,

it brings them the

care

a small group of indispensable persons or things

core

feeling we have for them.

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on

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On

the contrary

,

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,

when

uncle

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an uncle

or aunt gives

cash

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to a youngster

,

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,

he can buy whatever he

want

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wants

meanwhile he can go for

alchol

a liquor or brew containing alcohol as the active agent

alcohol

drugs etc. Despite

,

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,

if he would have been given a tablet or

mobil

migratory

mobile

phone it will keep him attached to the family tree as well as it will stay longer with him to create a strong bond in

family

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the family

.

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,

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,

cash

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in

hands

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the hands

of young

child

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is risky and can lead to

series

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a series

of problems. In my opinion

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,

giving

money

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is not a good idea.

adults

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Adults

find it

more easy

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easier

easiest

to give but if in the

longrun we

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long run, we

long run we

think about it may be the

child

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who looks so innocent at home have a bad

compnay

an institution created to conduct business

company

who ate doing drugs, but he

couldnot

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could not

give it a try as a matter of fact he never had

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cash

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the cash

.

after

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After

ellaborating

marked by complexity and richness of detail

elaborating

elaboration

this

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fact do we really

handover

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hand over

dollars to our son or daughter??

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The

answer is definitely no.

rather

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Rather

than

this

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if

i

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I

get him a new watch whenever he look at it

,

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will bring the good lasting memories of

fanily

a social unit living together

family

gathering on his graduation day or birthday.

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,

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teenage is very labile prone age for all the influences.

every

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Every

child

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have

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has

his own mindset to perceive the surroundings.

to

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To

make it more lucid

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i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would conclude the discussion with like for a

child

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aged 20 years when given

cash

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might think of that

i

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I

havenot

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have not

tried a cigarette because mum never gave me luxury of 1000

rs

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Rs

yrs

rows

i

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I

should get one smoke

,

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,

on the other side of rope

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another

boys

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boy

might think that he have 2000

rs

a period of time containing 365 (or 366) days

yrs

already saved with him with

this

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additive amount he can buy himself the Brumano trouser.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

its quite two different opinions of same age group

boys but

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boys, but

one can be really injurious effects while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

have nothing to do just the

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phot

pointing out something

that

fame he wants.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

,

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,

we

shouldnot

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should not

give

money

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to teenagers because they are unpredictable about how they will use their gift bad way or

good way

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a good way

.