Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples from your experience or knowledge.

Nowadays
climate
change
is one of the main problems of the earth. A portion of people think that we should find
a
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an
alternative. But I think we need to resolve
this
problem.
This
essey
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
issue
will discuss the disagreement of the above statement. Some folks think we should go for another option
instead
of preventing
climate
change
they feel
this
way because, they
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way, because they
are not taking
this
issue seriously.
For instance
, a recent study done by
a
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an
environmental not for profit organization found that a
smll
limited or below average in number or quantity or magnitude or extent
small
village of North India was abandoned by the natives due to
water crisis
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the water crisis
.
In addition
, still people are not taking
this
problem seriously.
People
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The people
of the
third
world countries
are concentrate
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are concentrating
are concentrated
more on food and housing as
primary concern
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a primary concern
the primary concern
.
Unemployment rate
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The unemployment rate
is increasing
gradully
in a gradual manner
gradually
in the whole world. An
internation
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international
humanitarian organization The Earth have found in their six months long survey that due to
crisis
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the crisis
in the middle east and economic slowdown in India people faced
unemployement
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
. That's why people are more focusing on their earning
instead
of environment protection.
On the other hand
, some people think that migration to
develop
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developing
developed
countries like UK, US, Canada is a solution. The main problem is that
majority
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the majority
of people think about their own
instead
of
whole world
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the whole world
.
Moreover
, there are very less
climate
change
awareness campaigns done globally. People love to
speard
distribute or disperse widely
spread
awareness through social media. During amazon forest burning people were protesting by social
media but
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media, but
the number of ground protests in Brazil
were
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was
very less. To conclude, people need to be more serious about
climate
change
as it affects
everying
all things
everything
everyone
of our life. We must
speard
distribute or disperse widely
spread
more awareness across the globe. There is no other option to avoid
this
challenge.
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