In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
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government
should be makes all careers in the same level salaries or the better for county if they make this
disprity
?
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essay I am going to explain my view and draw my personal conclusion.
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the government
make
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makes
disprity
between salariesinequality or difference in some respect
disparity
.
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.
Firstly
, the different salary is a good for the economy because encourage people to work
harder and the produced
will be better for commodities offered for sale
product
country
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the country
.
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.
Secondly
, some careers don't necessary to work
to
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government
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assessing
.
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.
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develop
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countries.
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However
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a good thing. It makes poor at all times; all the time and on every occasion
always
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people feel
work
harder and to improve their living. When the poor people seeing the rich people
lifestyle, they will want to be like them. So, that inspired them to found better job opportunities. Suggestion
person's
peoples'
Finally
, the government
can provide some fainancil
aid to encourage them to involving financial matters
financial
work
or make the education and health care is free to help them.
In conclusion, making salaries in the certain level that is
not a solution to income disprity
. But inequality or difference in some respect
disparity
disparities
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the
government
can help them to work
harder by offering good salary for them and make the education and health care is free.Submitted by rore2017lo on
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