Some people think that online reading materials are better for children. Others argue that traditional paper-based resources are better. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Although

more and more people considering e-books as the most useful medium of reading, other people still think paper-based material is more effective. I agree with the latter view since hard copies of books are usually more reliable and up to date. Advocates of electronic books would argue that

this

form of books

are

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easy to move and they are slightly

cheap

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cheaper

This

is unlike traditional books where you have to carry hard copies all the time. For electronic books, you can access online through the internet at any time and any place.

Besides

, they are inexpensive and you can purchase unlimited books by purchasing through any website.

For example

, Amazon currently offers its members unlimited access for one year for any books with only paying 100 dollars.

In contrast

, if you spend the same amount on purchasing paper-based books, it will highly probably

to buy

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buy

only 2 or 3 books with

this

amount.

However

, other people still believe that paper-based resources are more reliable and updated and I completely support their view.

This

is because reading material available on the internet

are

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outdated and rarely updated. The owners of the server put all these books a long ago and never replaced them.

Also

, electronic versions of books easily downloadable from every website which puts a big question mark on its reliability. In most of the cases, there are piracy issues with

them which

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them, which

undoubtedly, made them less authentic. In conclusion, while some people argue that online books are

more effective

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most effective

for children, others disagree and still prefer a paper version of the book. I opine that printed books are effective resources for reading as these are more authentic and revised version.

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