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Both the rich and the poor find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

#accessibility #university
Nowadays, getting into the
university
 isn’t easier as people want to go to a college to get a
graduation
Suggestion
graduate
 degree more than ever before and students who are not talented enough are finding it really hard to make their
way
 into one despite their financial conditions.
This
 essay will discuss the implications of the financial conditions of the students to get into a
university
 as per my views and to what extent
this
 thought is correct. As per my understanding, people with a rich background are more likely to get into the
university
 and succeed as they have enough money to support their education without doing any additional work. That
way
 they
also
 get much time to study. While students who come from the poor or middle-class families, have to make their own
way
 to the
university
by
Suggestion
of
 saving the money by doing various jobs and they don’t get much time to prepare for the entrance exam.
Therefore
, they are less likely to get admission. Though wealthy people can enjoy the benefits of being rich there is
also
 a downside as many good universities offer scholarships and even sponsor the full program for worthy students and who should they sponsor
also
 depends on the background of students who are actually brilliant but cannot afford to study on their own.
Such
 universities prefer only talented students who meet their selection criteria. In essence, I agree with the statement given
above
Accept comma addition
above, however
however
 difficulties for wealthy and poor may not be the same. Wealthy students have an upper hand to get into the
university
 due to the facilities they have, while poor people have to make their own
way
 from the scratch to the
top but
Accept comma addition
top, but
 there are some universities who always prefer students based on their intelligence and curiosity
instead
 of their financial status.
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