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After being involved in an accident, you were rescued by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: 1) Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you're writing 2) Express your appreciation 3) Request to pay him/her to visit.

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Dear Mr. Anderson, I
am writing
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was writing
wrote
this
 letter to appreciate you for saving my life
last
 week from the motorbike that knocked me down in front of the pizza hut. My name is Adriel, a student of
University
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the University
 of Lagos. I am currently in my final year and studying Computer Engineering. On that fateful day, 28th August precisely I was attempting to go across the road to use the Automated Teller Machine (ATM) when an oncoming motorbike that was oblivious of pedestrian cross stripe knocked me down and rode off the scene. I am sending
this
 bouquet of flower and
this
 thank you card to appreciate your stopping by to rush me to the clinic. Your kindness toward a stranger like me is far beyond words.
Furthermore
, I really want to thank you particularly for picking up my treatment bill and driving me home afterward. God bless you. I noted your company address on the call card you left for me is closer to the Training
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
Center
 I enrolled for my computer lessons.
Hence
, would you be
opened
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open
 to entertain an afternoon visit from me on Tuesday 2nd of September? I look forward to your kind response. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Adriel Matthew.
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