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Hello, I am Nesibe Özer. I would like to start with my educational background. I graduated from
Yalova University
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the Yalova University
from
business administration department
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the business administration department
. And I took some courses which
is related
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are related
Marihe
of or relating to the sea
marine
program
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as strategic management, strategic human resources, invention and innovation.
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often worked to complete presentations with my classmates and actually, my best academic presentation experience was at the international conference of business
students which
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students, which
is about our research stud and I supposed that it will be published in a month. After all of these, my abroad experience was started with a language school in London.
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, I was
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an Erasmus student
in Slovenia.
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, during my study, I had some experiences about software programs
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as SPSS and R Studio. That’s why I applied an open university about web design and
codding
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coding
. I would like to share with some of my motivation. I have a dream of studying abroad, but it is not only one. One of the reasons which is pushing me to apply for
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a specialization area
with a global version. Studying in Marihe, I would be able to synthesize some different countries which have a different economic profile. Become an academician is my age-long ambition. For that reason, I believe that it is the most beneficial
program
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for me and that's my other motivation reason. A few years ago,
Erasmus
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the Erasmus program
program
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affected me deeply because It gave me both academic and life education. Even now, it is one of my reasons for the participation of Marihe. As
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the Erasmus organization slogan
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ONCE ERASMUS ALWAYS ERASMUS. I would like to hear good news from you.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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