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Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

#accessibility #university
Many people across globe believe, getting into universities requires sophisticated skill and competent abilities. Matriculating into
university
Suggestion
a university
 is not linked with the financial status of a student. I agree with
this
 notion and believe that gaining admission needs academic merit not moneyed background. Now a day’s, most of the universities develop a competitive framework for the entrance examination and assessment is solely based on excellence. It is seen on many occasions that a learner from a well-heeled family denies admittance because they are incompetent and unskilled. According to a recent report published on Indian journal “The Times of India” a total of 46 graduates out of 116 who got acceptance in iconic engineering college “IIT” in the year 2018 belongs to impoverished families. Many universities across the globe comes up with a stupendous idea of financial aid to provide monetary support to sagacious scholar who hails from impecunious family.
This
 innovative idea receives a round of applause from every corner of society especially from educational ace. It completely closed the door for all speculation where people believe that fruitful education require a hefty amount of money. In the year 2019 umpteen student got admission to distinguished
university
 in USA through financial aid program. To conclude, ability and skill are the only criteria to get entry into
university
 and financial background has no role in gaining access to
university
.
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