You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter . describe what you enjoyed about the course. . say how much cooking you've done since the course . suggest another cookery course you'd like school to offer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my views on the cookery class which I have completed last
month. You will be pleased to know that I had a wonderful time at
the class.
Let me explain my experiences in more detail. I have Change preposition
in
learn't
many new recipes since I had enrolled in the Correct your spelling
learnt
course
. I found the teaching staff very supportive and they kept me motivated. Also
I got the opportunity to interact with many people, some of whom are still in contact with me. As we all come from different cultures and Add a comma
,Also
background
, the concept of Role Reversal in which we share the recipe of our cultural cuisine with each other was Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
very
thoughtful concept and I personally found it very helpful.
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the very
a very
Furthermore
, this
course
has helped me to cook food at home which my family is loving it. Also
I have been cooking daily as Add a comma
,Also
i
have developed Change the capitalization
I
great
interest after the completion of Add an article
a great
course
.
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the course
In addition
, I would like the school to offer me a course
on Chinese cuisines so that I can widen my knowledge of cooking with different regional food items.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
Dhiren RanaCorrect your spelling
Yours
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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