Some people think tht public heath within country can be imposed by govt mking laws.discuss your opinin

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nomatter
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no matter
personal or public is reciprocal to
food
choices.Wellbeing of mankind is directly linked to the lifestyle
ofthe
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of the
person and vary from
one
another.
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of people
have
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has
faith
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that government should
government
should intervene to make solid rules and legislations to implement healthy
food
options.
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bunch
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a bunch
the bunch
of people
hold
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holds
strong
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strongly
believe in that what
one
should
eatand
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eat and
drink is an independent
choice
of the
persn
a human being
person
persons
himself.
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essay will
articularize
be specific about
particularize
and reel
off
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of
fact and findings of healthy eating habits and their impact on
one
's life and how the
food
regulatory authorities can make
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a road map
the road map
to decline the adverse effects of unhealthy non hygienic
food
.The latter part of
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the essay
will spell put and weigh out both thoughts with day to day examples to make
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it
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more lucid. Legislators could make and impose laws regarding the availability of unhealthy
food bu
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food, but
food but
what to eat
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when to eat and how much to consume is
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a wholly personal choice
wholly personal choice
choice
.
However
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the governing body can only make a layout and prerequisite regarding
food
availbility
the quality of being at hand when needed
availability
.
For example
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sugary
drinks ave
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drink save
a debilitating effect on growing children leading to a major cause of obesity.
In addition
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energy sugar rich drinks cause
ceetain
definite but not specified or identified
certain
injurious debilitating effects on growing minds and body causing addictive behaviour.What
government
should do in
this
disturbing scenario??There should be a law to be imposed in schools
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universities
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colleges that no cold carbonated drinks can be sold to under 15.
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That's
one
way to tackle the rising issue while on the
otherhand
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other hand
media
compaigns
a race between candidates for elective office
campaigns
campaign
and health education can
also
catch the eye of both adults and young.The trend of healthy can be set by celebrities and can be a motivation to the young and
dilemma
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the dilemma
of the current day can be looked over. As a matter of fact
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if the seller of saturated fatty
food
chains
are heavily taxed
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is heavily taxed
by the
government
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even
then
there will a drastic decline in the sales and free availability. On the other side of
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the rope
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since in a liberal society personal freedom is a vital human right
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some fellows believe in and staunch to the idea that the
persom
a human being
person
should be responsible himself what he can eat and what he cannot.But, putting a block
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that you have to eat
this
and
that is
not a good idea as well as its like depriving
one
from his basic human right of selecting the
food
he wants to consume.In
this
modern era of
urbanizatuon
the condition of being urbanized
urbanization
urbanisation
and technology
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where every
informatiom
a message received and understood
information
is just a click away
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,
one
can watch out for himself.
Moreover
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creatinng
make or cause to be or to become
creating
barriers to choices and introducing
such
kind of laws and acts can bring up distress and dissatisfaction in the society which may possibly lead to protests.I agree
wuth
expresses the means used
with
the
choice
that
one
should be health educated by seminars
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social and print media and
then
the person should be left alone with the
choice
he wants to make for himself. Concluding the whole thing
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even though the
government
is vigilant enough to control the
dietry
of or relating to the diet
dietary
habits of its
fellowmen
a very slender natural or synthetic fiber
filament
flaming
through taxation
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laws
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and
restrictions
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decline in public health expenditure won't be
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the only outcome
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legislative
inplementation
the act of accomplishing some aim or executing some order
implementation
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of
the nation can go sideways as
well creating
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well, creating
widespread protests and shutdown against the
government
hurting and depriving basic human rights.For that reason
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nutrition and diet decision are better to be left
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up to
well informed individuals.
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