smoking can cause serious illness and should be made illegal. To what extend do you agree?

In recent days, there are many serious opinions about the
future
of
ciggaretes
finely ground tobacco wrapped in paper; for smoking
cigarettes
. The health reason and did not have any advantages are the main opinions
for
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of
people who advised
smoke
to be made illegal. In my opinion the
smoke
must be clean from any society.
To begin
with, regarding the health situation of people.
Smoke
can cause a lot of disadvantages for people. Not only for people who consumed it, but
also
for the people who sit or stand near the smoker.
the
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The
multiple
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multiplier
multiplying
multiplicative
effect
of
smoke
has made
huge
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a huge effect
effect
over the world. Due to the rise of serious illnesses caused by
smoke
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smoking, such
smoking such
such
as; cancer,
asma
, and impotent. Illegal is the right option for the
future
of
ciggarete
finely ground tobacco wrapped in paper; for smoking
cigarettes
.
In addition
,
smoke
which
are born
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bore
was bearing
were bearing
was borne
many years ago from
indian
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
culture as
an
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a
friendship symbol has made
big influence
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a big influence
for many civilizations until nowadays. The cool of
commecial
connected with or engaged in or sponsored by or used in commerce or commercial enterprises
commercial
and promotion
from
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of
for
the movie
also
has made
smoke
become the most popular stuff, even in
develop
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developing
country
smoke
is the main consume for those people who live there. Without any
possitive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
effect
,
Accept space
,
these conditions are very dangerous for the
future
generation. Preventing the
smoke
growth by
stop
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stopping
the commercial and made it illegal
are
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is
the best solutions.
Finally
, the illegal
sollution
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solution
solutions
are
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is
the best for the
future
of
smoke
,
seriouss
concerned with work or important matters rather than play or trivialities
serious
ilness
impairment of normal physiological function affecting part or all of an organism
illness
and there are no advantages at all are the main reasons. Considering of the dangerous
effect
from the
growth
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growing
number of people who consumed it, it is
very logic
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the very logic
to ban any
smoke
from every society. In my personal opinion, the
effect
also
can
caused
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cause
the people who sit near the smoker are the main reasons to make the
smoke
illegal.
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