Should governments make decisions about people's lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?

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Governing bodies are one who is

manages

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managing

the law and order of the

society

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and so they are responsible for making rules that may affect

nature

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the nature

of the individuals.

However

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, I would like to suggest that the

government

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should not interfere with personal matters of the citizens like food, costumes and anything which is not a crime by the law of that region. Admittedly, if the

government

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if not having any control on it's people there may chances of increased crime rate

that is

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because of usage of drugs in

this

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society

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, if it is not regulated by the

government

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. If the drug use in the

society

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is not regulated by law, it will definitely lead to drug abuse and eventually end up in

destruction

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the destruction

of the whole

society

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. So the

government

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, if they really care of their citizens they should make opinions, which are good for their individuals.

On the other hand

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, the people are allowed to make choices on their habits, it can result to unhealthy

lifestyle

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life style

like smoking,

alcoholism which

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alcoholism, which

may lead to chronic diseases like cancer, heart attack and even death. So in my words, it will be beneficial for the individuals, if the

government

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is implementing the rules and regulations for

reduce

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reducing

reduced

such

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unhealthy habits and

also

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should try to create some awareness among the people. To recapitulate, the

government

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being the regulating authority

have

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has

the rights to make

opinion

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an opinion

on people's lifestyle.

Eventhough

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Even though

the people should be allowed to make decisions on their nature of life, considering the consequences.

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Should governments make decisions about people's lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the streets. Still, there are robberies that happen inside houses. What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his/her own security? Use specific reasons and examples to support.

In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Doctors recommend that older people should excersice regularly.However many of them do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?