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People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint

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In today's world, choosing the right work is vital to employees' career path. In
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 regard, many people select a monotonous or repetitive job, while some ambitious individuals are keen to change their employment and a company as frequently as possible for their future career plan and personal development. On the one hand, the personal preference is matter, and it is clear that some people are likely to take the employment which is suggesting a golden opportunity for them,
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 career development, perks and increments, so that career-oriented individuals always change the workplaces and employers. From the many peoples' point, the advantage of these kind of employment is a high salary, due to starting the new jobs, they are always seeking a chance to raise their salary.
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, seasonal workers earn much higher than ordinary employees in most of the Western countries.
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, they have a high-paying jobs.
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, some people are willing to stay in one place for a long period of time.
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 to say, they receive a job satisfaction differently. The main reason for not leaving can be an economic instability or times of hardship. One of the possible privileges not to leave the company is stable working conditions. In these times, staff wants to continue their working process as long as possible. To illustrate
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, in 2008 global financial difficulties took over the work of many people.
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, some people decided not to quit working. To conclude,
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 many people have different kind of job. The influencing factor are higher salary, better conditions and a suitable atmosphere.
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