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global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the XXI century and “c” levels are continuing to rice.

#threats #humans #face #xxi #century #“c” #levels #rice
the
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The
 problem of changing temperatures is very actual nowadays.
this
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This
 question is one of the most essential in the world.
our
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Our
 lives
are highly depend
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highly depend
 on the place we live in.
the
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The
 most important factors are temperature and climate.
changing
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Changing
 temperatures badly
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
 on people, animals, nature.
a
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A
 lot of animals and birds
are have
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have
 to leave their habitat because of the climate change.
some
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Some
 of the animal species may even extinct.
global
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Global
 warming has a strong impact on people too.
scientists
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Scientists
 say that some
healthy
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health
 problems are definitely because of the climate change.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
, nature suffers too:
gleciers
a slowly moving mass of ice
glaciers
 are melting, the
see
a division of an ocean or a large body of salt water partially enclosed by land
sea
 levels are rising, plants are dying.
last
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Last
 but not least, global warming causes
lack
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Lack
 of food resources like grain, fruits and vegetables.
in
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In
 my opinion, people have to pay more attention to
this
 problem as our future depends on it.
we
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We
 should cut fuel consumptions, fly less
,
Accept space
,
 consume less plastic.
we
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We
dont
do not
don't
 have to pollute the atmosphere.

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