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i. Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. ii. Why is this? iii. What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Throughout the globe, the natives of a majority of countries, preferring solar
energy
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 as the
source
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 for their domestic
energy
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 use.
Although
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 solar
energy
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 is environmental-friendly and doesn't require fuel to work, it is highly dependent on climate and generates
electricity
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 on sunny days only. The advantages of solar
energy
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,
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, easily outweigh its disadvantages when compared with other sources. Solar
energy
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 is the cleanest and efficient form of
energy
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 since
sunlight
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 captured by a solar panel is directly converted to
electricity
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.
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, there is no cost required to run the solar panel via fuels: petrol, diesel or natural gases, making solar
energy
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 the cheapest
source
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.
For instance
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, in India, farmers use solar
energy
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 to power their homes and water pumps to irrigate their crop fields. They even sell extra
energy
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, if produced, to their regional
electricity
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 boards to generate additional profits.
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, solar
energy
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 is beneficial to both humankind and nature since it is pollution-free power. Despite the pros, climate and environment
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drastically affect
 the performance of the solar panel since the amount of
energy
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 generated is dependent on the quantity of
sunlight
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 trapped. So, solar
energy
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 is not a consistent power
source
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, especially in winter and rainy seasons,
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 forcing people to rely on other types of
energy
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.
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, a polluted environment can hinder the capturing of
sunlight
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 by reflecting the same, making solar
energy
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 useless even in summer seasons.
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, at present India's solar capacity is 25 Gigawatts
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GW) and has a target of reaching 100 Gigawatts
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GW) by 2022.
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, the capacity is estimated to increase to only 46 GW by the end of 2022 because of adverse climate: unpredictable rainfalls and cold or smog environment, causing hindrance to the capturing of
sunlight
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.
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, the performance of solar
energy
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 is weather dependent and
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, a variable
source
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. To conclude, the usage of solar
energy
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 has become incredibly common. While there is no doubt that solar
energy
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 is not an all-time
source
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, but it is
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 true that solar
energy
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 is a cheap
source
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 to produce eco-friendly
electricity
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.

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