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Many people believe that in order to have clean and tidy streets in their neighborhood, this should be the residents’ responsibility; while others think it should be the government’s duty. What is your opinion?

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It is thought by many that the individuals are solely responsible to keep their surrounding roads
litter
 free, while others opine that it is ought to be the duty of the state. In my opinion, I believe that the government is the primary responsible for
this
 because the authorities can make
litter
 bins more accessible as well as introduce strict punishment for those who
litter
 irresponsibly.
To begin
 with, more
litter
 bins can be placed in public places including the roads
.
Accept space
.
Establishing adequate
waste
 bins would encourage citizens to
litter
 sensibly which will lead to keep the roads clean and tidy. If people find
proper way
Suggestion
the proper way
a proper way
proper ways
 of disposing
waste
, they would take their
first
 step to keep
their
objective case of they
them
 around street clean. To illustrate, city roads are appeared to more
waste
free
Suggestion
freer
 than the village streets because the municipalities took
actions
Suggestion
action
 to place available
waste
 pots along the city roads. Creating public awareness is another method through which the government can perform their duty.
In other words
, as more people would be concerned about the importance of nit and tidy paths, more it would be possible to have clean
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
. The state can organize awareness programs through schools and print media that would lead to make a combined effort of citizens and the authorities to make the roads clean.
Finally
, the government can keep the roads tidy by introducing
harshar
unpleasantly stern
harsher
 (harsher) penalty to those who
litter
 insensibly. Imposing severe punishment would deter individuals to abstain from
such
 act. More street cameras can be established through which the authorities can catch the culprit doing the act. In conclusion, the nation has the authority to take necessary measures like making
waste
 pots more available, promoting general awareness and imposing fine for who are irresponsible to
waste
 disposal. Proper and effective measures taken by the state would ensure cleanliness
in roads
an encroachment or intrusion
inroads
 in the
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
.
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