Today ,the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At present, advertising is a part of sales
promotion in products
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promotion products
.It is true that in order to
high
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higher
sales of products is a vital role in showing
a
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an
attractive way for the customer.
However
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
do not agree with
this
assertion for some specific reasons.
To begin
with
,
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,
there are many people
,
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,
who argue that advertisement of consumer goods are promoting their good in
different way
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a different way
different ways
to motivate the customer.
Although
, all are not
real
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really
important for the household.
Firstly
,
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,
presenting
attractive way
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an attractive way
is not beneficial to know about quality and some cases
,
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,
are not lasting according to the advertisement.Many
company
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companies
,
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,
for example
, of the world
such
as china show their goods via satellite channels and social
media but
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media, but
many products do not get good quality to the
cutomer
someone who pays for goods or services
customer
that have attracted a lot of in watching
advertisement
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an advertisement
the advertisement
in
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at
from
home and abroad.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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