There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?

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Despite knowing about climate change, human activities
has been causing
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have been causing
have caused
global
tempratures
the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)
temperatures
higher.
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essay will examine the main causes of
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actual issue and possible solutions. The two
mains
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main
causes of higher temperatures are globalisation and deforestation.
Firstly
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, overpopulation are the major issues of
environement
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
. People must be
feed
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fed
and dress, for
this
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reason industries produces continuously and they generate
polution
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
and waste. According to jack
prevost
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Prevost
a searcher from the CNRS, 90% of the climate change is due to
pollution
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. It is estimated that 60% of
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pollution
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is
release
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released
in the form of harmful clouds and 40% is caused by
chemical product
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chemical products
a chemical product
dumped in river and sea. The searcher wrote in
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artical
nonfictional prose forming an independent part of a publication
article
that industries and transport are the
mains
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main
factors.
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, industries and household habits must destroy trees to produce energy.
However
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, it releases CO2 in
air
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the air
and
this
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will increase the temperatures and cause global warming.
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, in
UK
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the UK
a searcher from
oxford
a university town in northern Mississippi; home of William Faulkner
Oxford
university publish an article on the
futurescientist
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future scientist
magazine where he
estimate
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estimates
that the level of temperature will reach a peak in 2050.
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, people and industries have to change their habits because they consume more than they need. Today, we use all our essential
resources but
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resources, but
what do we will delegate to our descendant
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Some
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Any
possible solution to
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problems
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problem
to limit
production
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and
do
engage in
make
more propaganda about
environment
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the environment
. Currently, it is estimated that only 60% of the global
production
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are used
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is used
by
consumer
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consumers
the consumer
. The 30% are throw and only a few percent
are recycled
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is recycled
. I believe that if
overconsumtion
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are
limited
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limiting
the energy used and amount of
pollution
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will considerably decrease. For
exemple
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
examples
, in
norway
a constitutional monarchy in northern Europe on the western side of the Scandinavian Peninsula; achieved independence from Sweden in 1905
Norway
, the government encouraged local
production
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and have waste and
pollution
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policy.
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,
this
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effort should
also
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ne done by the population they should recycle and limit their purchases to the strict minimum. To support
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argument we can retake the
exemple
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
of suede where the government
make
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makes
a lot of propaganda to
sensibilize
make sensitive or aware
sensibilise
people with environment issues. In conclusion, people’s activities have a negative impact on the environment and that level up
global temperature
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global temperatures
the global temperature
. In
this
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essay, we discussed two mains causes
:
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:
globalisation and deforestation if it is
mananeged
be successful; achieve a goal
managed
correctly by limiting
production
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and
do
engage in
make
more propaganda to sensibilise the population global warming will
thus
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be avoided.
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