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Doctors in many countries believe that people are not getting enough exercise. What might be causing this lack of exercise? What can be done to address the issue?

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In most of the
nations
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nation
, there is a firm belief by doctors that people are not staying fit because of improper
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excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
.
This
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essay
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 will suggest two main causes that stress and family issues
leads
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lead
 to a lack of
fitness
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.
This
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essay
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 will
also
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 suggest two main solutions
such
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 as performing
excercises
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercises
exercise
in
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at
 leisure time and joining in
gym
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the gym
 will keep their body perfect. The primary issues behind the lack of
excericse
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
 is due to the stress
that is
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 immensely created by work and the problems that arises in the family. People are intensely focussing more towards their job and fails to take care of their
health
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.
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, they are facing a plethora of family implications that makes them extremely unhappy.
For instance
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, a recent
survey
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Survey
 shows Indian people are facing humongous
health
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 issues because of improper
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excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
 and diet. These implications
clearly conveys
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clearly convey
 why people are incredibly lacking in
fitness
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. There are certain ways to overcome
this
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 by having
fitness
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 in their
convinent
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
continent
 time and joining a gym. Despite their regular work, they should start walking more and do necessary
excercises
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercises
such
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 as stretching and breathing. They can
also
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 join in a gym to get proper
councelling
something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action
counselling
 from the experts. To illustrate, my friend was very fat and faced several
health
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 problems. He started performing
trialthlon
sporting contest involving swimming, running and cycling
triathlon
in
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on
 the weekends with complete focus which made him reduce 10 kgs in 6 months.
Therefore
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, these measures
eventually reduces
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eventually reduce
 the issues in the body and creates awareness on
excercises
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercises
. To conclude, Doctors think that men and women are lagging in
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excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
.
This
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essay
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 suggested the two main causes as more tension towards their work duties and household issues distracts them from executing
fitness
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.
This
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essay
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also
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 suggested solutions that proper
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excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
 will
defnitely
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
 bolster people's
health
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 and lead a better life

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