In the past, most people used to travel to their place work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphone, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantage and disadvantage of this development?

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Nowadays, whilst the majority of people prefer to travel to
their
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their work place
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work
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each
day
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, other stay working at
home
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.
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has become possible thanks to the birth of
internet
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the internet
and the development of new cutting-edge
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as
smartphone
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smartphones
a smartphone
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, there will be many advantages and disadvantages for them. In
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essay, I will discuss both of the positive and negative aspect of
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new development. There
are
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a definite advantage
advantage
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for people starting to
work
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from
home
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. The main
advantage
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is that give them flexibility. Indeed, the environment is more comfortable than seating on a chair all the
day
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. They can
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have a break at any time they need without being controlled by someone.
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kind of
work
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is a great opportunity for
parents particularly
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parents, particularly
when they have
a newborn they
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a newborn, they
make them available for their children.
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is
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a good way to
work
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for people who come from a
place
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far from their
place
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of
work
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. They do not need to pay for transport ticket every
day
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and spend 2h on
train
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the train
a train
. All of
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advantage
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is possible thanks to
internet
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the internet
and smartphone because they can stay
on
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in
contact with their colleagues and manager.
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, working at from
home
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can
also
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have its disadvantage. Travelling to the
place
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work
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help people to be more sociable. They have to face people every
day
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and
work
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on
team
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a team
teams
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working from
home
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make employee unsociable and feel
lonely particularly
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lonely, particularly
when they already live alone at
home
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.
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, other employee
are not focused
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is not focussed
is not focused
any more with their
work
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. The absence of colleagues
do not help
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does not help
them keep a
work
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atmosphere, they are easy to distract and it becomes difficult for them to finish
their paper of
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their paper
work
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. In conclusion, as can be seen from the points made in
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there are both advantages and disadvantage. Perhaps, the ideal arrangement would be to spend part of working in the office and the other part at
home
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. If managed in the right way;
however
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, I feel that overall the
advantage
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would outweigh the
disadvantag
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
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