The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

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IT IS OFTEN SAID THAT CHILDRENS EATING HABITS HAS CHANGED SINCE ONE DECADE AND
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WHY THERE IS 20% BOOST IN THE OBESE OFFSPRINGS.
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,
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ESSAY WILL DISCUSS HOW THE AVALABILITY OF A VARIETY OF FAST FOOD IS THE MAJOR REASON BEHIND
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ISSUE AND
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, WHAT ARE THE DETRIMENTAL IMPACT ON THE JUVENILE'S HEALTH. TO START WITH, THE MAIN REASON IS THAT TODAY, CHILDRE HAVE MORE CHOICES TO CHOOSE WHAT TO EAT WITHOUT BEING CONCIOUS ABOUT THE NUTRITION VALUES
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AS BURGERS, SANDWICHES AND SO ON.
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WILL MAKE THEIR MOUTH WATERING AFTER SEEING OR TASTING THAT DISHES. SOMETIMES, THE STATUS IN THE SOCIETY OF THE FAMILY FORCE OFFSPRINGS TO CHOOSE
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FOOD SINCE THEIR CHILDHOOD AND
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WIIL CONTINUE FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIFE.
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,
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HABIT BECOME THEIR LIFE-STYLE WHICH LEADS TO OVERFAT PROBLEMS.
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, HEALTH DEPARTMENT OF THE INDIA REVEALED THAT 805 OF OVERWEIGHT CHILD PATIENTS BELONGS TO A WEALTHY FAMILY.
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, SOME RICH FAMILY AE SEEN MORE DIET CONCIOUS AND NEVER LET THEIR CHILD TO EAT UNHEALTHY FOOD. ON THE EFFECT SIDE, THE GOVERNMENT HAS A MOJOR EFFECT OF
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TRAND. IN DETAIL, WHEN THE TODAY'S CHILDREN HAVE FITNESS PROBLEM
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IN THE FUTURE, THEY ARE UNABLE TO DO JOB AND GOVERNMENT HAS TO PAY FOR THIER MEDICAL EXPENSES.
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WILL CREAT A MORE FINANCIAL BURDEN ON THE AUTHORITY IN COMPARE TO TAX RETURN.
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, THE ECONOMY OF THE NATION WILL DECLINED.
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, ECONOMICAL SURVEYED DATA OF THE USA SHOWN THAT 50% OF THE OBESE CHILD ARE DISABLE TO GO FOR WORK AND
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HAS DECREASED THE 40% REVENUE OF THE USA. IN CONCLUSION, THE OBESITY OF THE CHILDREN INDEED AFFECTS EVERYONE ESPECIALLY AUTHORITY. IF WE GUID OUR JUVENILES IN THE CORRECT DIRECTION THAN SURELY
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PRESENT MENACE WILL BE DECLINED TO SOME EXTENT.
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IS THE WAY WE CAN HELP GOVERNMENT TO TACKLE THE ECONOMY PITFALLS.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overweight
  • obesity
  • caloric intake
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • screen time
  • physical education
  • nutritious
  • psychological well-being
  • self-esteem
  • socioeconomic
  • healthcare system
  • life expectancy
  • obesity-related complications
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