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People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, a large number of citizens become immigrants due to the search of rich, secure, and comfortable life in other developed nations with different conventions and cultures. While many admit that people should adopt new
country
’s rules and conventions when they intended to settle there, I strongly agree with
this
 idea because of several benefits and problems that people can face with them. Disobeying and unconsciousness about host
country
’s customs and traditions causes’ problem with the immigrants. On the
one
 hand, if a newcomer rejects to accept new environment, it will create a cultural barrier for
this
 new immigrant.
This
 leads to social separation, which has negative impacts on people’s lives.
In addition
, lack of knowledge of rules and regulations may lead to illegal actions in the new
country
 and make people dissatisfied.
For instance
, in Dubai, government fine car owner if they found a car with dust on the road and even if it’s in car parking area.
On the other hand
, immigrants can easily get approved and gain benefits in a new
country
 if they follow the customs and traditions.
Firstly
,
one
 benefit is that immigrants behave in accordance with local norms, they will be accepted easily by the local inhabitants, and
as a result
, they will receive affections and respects as well as some help in any problems.
For example
, newcomers can get introduced
with
Suggestion
to
 people easily for their acceptance of new cultures, and people started to think them as
one
 of them.
Secondly
, practicing host
country
’s cultures and traditions enables
one
 to participate in any cultural functions and programs in the host
country
. Immigrants can join the community and share their joy and happiness like their own
country
. To conclude, all immigrants who tend to dwell in other countries should follow the customs and traditions of that
country
, which I strongly believe. It will help to create balance in the society as well as to get acceptance within the community.

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