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Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective. When it comes to the news? Do you think all news is true? What is the function of the newspaper?

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According to most people truth should be biased whenever it is in
news
Suggestion
the news
. All news is not true as it is unbiased due to some reasons. The newspaper plays an important role in acknowledging people about the system of nation in which they are living.
This
 essay will discuss about these points. As many
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
, truth should be as it is, when it is shown in news because these days, mostly it is hidden in case of politics. It is not shown completely as the basic things of a particular matter are concealed and these are not let to
comeout
Suggestion
come out
 due to political pressure or the greed of money by media personals. It is exemplified by the scam report of Indian Investigation Agency CBI, which revealed everything about the scam of 100 crore rupees, which were told only 10 crore rupees due to political pressure on
media
Suggestion
the media
.
Moreover
, sometimes there is unnecessary news which tells everything opposite to the reality.
This
also
 misguides the people and create a wrong image in front of
public
Suggestion
the public
 about a particular person.
For example
, Barack Obama was a philanthropist along with the position of president of The United States.
However
, media created his wrong image
infront
Suggestion
in front
 of people by spotting his character. The newspaper has a vital role to give information to the people of a particular nation as it contains every information related to the political system of a country, who is presiding over a particular state and in which state elections are going to
held
Suggestion
hold
. To conclude all news is not true, as some news
give
Suggestion
gives
 wrong and unnecessary information. The function of the newspaper is to keep people abreast of society.
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