People say that success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work.

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Because of many reasons, every
people
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person
want
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wants
to be successful. Some people suppose that success is "10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work".
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essay will discuss whether hard work was the best way to succeed, or talent is
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more vital. Talent is something that cannot be created. It exists inside every
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person
since they were born. To clarify, I want to give an example of myself. When I was three years old, my parents took me to a piano class, which belongs to a good pianist. At
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I was really excited. But after a few lessons, I find playing that instrument extremely difficult. I tried very hard.
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, I stopped learning when I finished
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three-month course. I realized that I had no talent for playing the piano and I was not capable of doing something that I am not good at.
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, "diligence in place of intelligence". Maybe you could not do
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anything
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time
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because you are not skillful enough.
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, if you practice
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and
time
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again, you will be good at it yourself. If failure
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attempt discourages you, you will not have enough motivation to perform the
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. Everything like studying, working, playing sports or
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characterized by or capable of producing music
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instruments, all the
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training
lead to the success.
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, a
high-school
a public secondary school usually including grades 9 through 12
highschool
student cannot distinguish between tenses in English, but when she does lots of exercises, reads English books or watches many English teaching video on the internet, she will be proficient in using them. According to me, hard work is far more important than
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. No need to be good at a specific field, you just need to spend
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practicing as well and you will achieve success.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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