Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In
contemporary era
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the contemporary era
, Discipline plays very
cucial
of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis
crucial
role in everyone's life.But some
says
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say
that it should be the responsibility of teachers
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while
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
says that it is the duty of the parents
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Now I will discuss both sides in upcoming paragraph. To
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take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
commence
that
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Discipline should be the duty of the tutor.Because children spend
alot
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a lot
of time in school.It is the schoolteacher's job to tell the
child
about the moral values like how to behave with others
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how to talk with others and how to obey rules.
Moreover
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the tutor should punish the students if they misbehave with others
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They
also
use punishment to correct their disobedience.
Furthermore
, The instructor
donot
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do not
do
engage in
make
any difference between the students like some examiners make
difference
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the difference
a difference
between the intelligent pupil and weak schoolchild
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They should treat all the juniors equally.
On the other hand
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As we know that parents is the
first
school of every
child
.They learn all the things from their parents like how to walk, how to speak, how to sit, how to stand and so on. The guardian
teach
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teaches
ethics and moral values to the kids. Without
parents
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parents'
children cannot survive in the society.
Moreover
, If guardians are well educated
then
they take care of their kids in every
field
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field, for
for
example they
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example, they
upbring
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up bring
their
child
in best way They shows his
child
in
good school
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a good school
. At the end
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I think both parents as well as
techers
a person whose occupation is teaching
teachers
are important for the children. They both teach discipline to the children.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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