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A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a self-study basis rather than attend a formal course. However, without the assistance of a teacher, students often find it difficult to manage their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Students prefer studying English independently to taking assistance from a teacher.
This
 is not an extremely difficult task to manage. In
this
 essay I would like to explain the same.
Firstly
, to learn English or any language
in particular
 students need to practice speaking, reading, writing and listening.
This
 can be done through various sources like newspapers, radio or
television which
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television, which
 does not require any supervision from a teacher. It depends on the interest of the student who aspires to learn a language like English and how much time they can spend learning it. In
this
 era of technology, there are many apps that allow students to register and learn any language for free of cost. Any non-native
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 speaker can use apps like Google Translate to translate the sentences from their mother
tounge
a mobile mass of muscular tissue covered with mucous membrane and located in the oral cavity
tongue
 to English in an extremely easy way.
This
 is an effective way of learning English without any formal course from a college or university. In conclusion, Students aspiring to learn
Englishon
Suggestion
English on
 a self-study basis can manage to do so without the help of a teacher.

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