You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for 6 months and look after their 6 year old kid. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with respect to an advertisement I saw in Australian magazine for looking after a
6 year
kid. Am really fortunate to find Add a hyphen
6-year
this
advert. My name is Sara, a full time
nursemaid with 10 years of experience in Add a hyphen
full-time
child
looking. As my work contract got expired Add an article
a child
last
month I was looking out for a new job.
Isn’t so much fun to be with kids? I love them! Even though am a graduate, I took this
profession as a nurse maid
only due to my interest Correct your spelling
nursemaid
to
kiddies. When it comes to experience, I worked 5 years as a nursery maid in one of the Change preposition
in
school
in Sydney and Change to a plural noun
schools
also
I was a nursemaid for an Add a hyphen
eight-year
eight year old
boy for about 5 years, which I just finished the contract with. I usually spend my day outs at my nearby orphanage, which is just Add a hyphen
eight-year-old
Correct your spelling
walkable
walk able
from my home. As I grew up there it’s like my Correct your spelling
walkable
second
home.
Could you please let me know,
if you feel am a suitable personRemove the comma
apply
.
You can call me Change the punctuation
?
at
878907899. Since I don’t have any family to stay with, I would be happier to be part of a family and Change preposition
on
also
would be happier to be a nanny for the little one and also
would be delighted to get a new job.
Thanking for
your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
SaraCorrect pronoun usage
you for
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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