Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people around the world tend to work extremely hard in the pursuit of happiness, and most of the times they consider, "being wealthy" is the only path to

achive

to gain with effort

achieve

their

altimate

furthest or highest in degree or order; utmost or extreme

ultimate

destination solitude. Opponents absolutely think

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. I completely agree with the fact that, in order to be joyful there are other

alternatives including

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alternatives, including

family and the job that we like. Billionaires who have astronomical wealth are

aften

many times at short intervals

often

been victims of pressure and

stess

the relative prominence of a syllable or musical note (especially with regard to stress or pitch)

stress

which comes from managing and

maitaining

keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"

maintaining

all their wealth.

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, Steve Jobs, who was the CEO of the company Apple, and was once the richest person on the

plannet

(astronomy) any of the nine large celestial bodies in the solar system that revolve around the sun and shine by reflected light; Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto in order of their proximity to the sun; viewed from the constellation Hercules, all the planets rotate around the sun in a counterclockwise direction

planet

plane

, felt that his net

worh

worthy of being treated in a particular way

worth

never made him happy, rather,

family

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the family

could have been the real proposition that could have kept him in peace. During his

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moments of life, he was regretful of being able to achieve the

pinacle

(architecture) a slender upright spire at the top of a buttress of tower

pinnacle

of the success and become

richest person

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the richest person

in the world at the cost of his happiness. Most of the workforce these days are running around and putting more hours on a daily basis at their workplaces to simply make the most money out of their jobs. They are sacrificing the most valuable things like their social moments, exercise, and sometimes much needed sleep as well. All of these sacrifices in order to become rich are taking toll on the people's lives. As an example, employees who are working in IT sector nowadays, psychologically worked up immensely.

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, they are becoming victims of heart problems, depression and diabetes.

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eventually let

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eventually lets

them never be happy in their lives. In conclusion, being able to become financially strong not always necessarily the solution for being cheerful in life.