During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear

Mr.

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Jordan, We met

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the

Indogo

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Indigo

flight from Delhi to Bombay on 25th November, I sat

to you during the journey. I told you that I was currently looking for a job, and you suggested

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that you can help me fit in with any of your restaurants. I am writing

this

letter to tell you that I am interested in the administrative profile,

therefore

I would like you to give me an opportunity in any of your managerial profiles where I can handle your restaurant's management and with my key skills help you to make it a better place to eat. I've total 3 years of proven experience in the same field,

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, have I can be a great fit for

this

profile. I've attached my resume with

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mail for your reference. Please let me know when can I come to meet you for the interview. I would be very grateful

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if you give me an opportunity to prove myself in one of your restaurants. Hope to hear from you soon. Thank You Yours

Truely

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Truly

Alia

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

181 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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