Some people believe that politicians are more influential than scientists, whilst others believe that scientists have more influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People will be influenced usually with high authority or famous persons which indicated its a human nature. In recent days, both politicians and scientists are very well known and their ideas and point of view will affect others due to their popularity. Political persons generally have more power in our democratic government and they ideally have many followers.
For instance
, TamilNadu has a more popular party lead named Anna, by which the whole state followed his belief. His rules are very helpful for those who are under the poverty line, who even carving for their single day meal.
Although
they have more influence over others, that should be in the well deserved hand who are humble and willing to sacrifice.But nowadays, most of the politicians are corrupt and they even don't have any knowledge of the constitution and not even caring for the society. Scientists usually are very intelligent and knowledgeable when compares to others
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Accept space
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but they lack power even though very influential in our environment.We have a living example of a legend who made India proud by launching a satellite to the moon. But they need backup for their thoughts to be executed both in people resource and financial ways.

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