Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does Tourism bring more advantages and disadvantages to a country ?

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I fully consent that

tourism

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for any

country

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is advantageous.

Tourism

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can be described in a way that influx of people to other countries for viewing the beauty and speciality of destination countries. Enthralled with the iconic view, gratified thoroughly in engrossing themselves in

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such beautiful location

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such a beautiful location

, it provides an opportunity

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for

tourist

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to grasp the culture and imbibed the positivity pervaded in the nature. Countries are investing heavily to develop

tourist

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hotspot and building infrastructure to be hotbed

for

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tourist

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and making eye catching spot for attracting them. Many countries

major

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majored

are majoring

revenue coming up from

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dept

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Dept

dept.

, adopting

plan

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plans

to create

heavenly environment

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a heavenly environment

is the most important aspects the

region

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regional

head. Beholding beauties and soothing nature in any

countries apparently

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countries, apparently

entice

tourist

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to reserve the spot. Countries must keep

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birds eye view on security of

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as mayhem, or untoward incident with them would be malicious and detrimental for

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next visit

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the next visit

of that

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instead

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would fan out the information to other colleagues do not plan to visit the

country

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where they faced humiliation and felt unsecured. Countries having historical places are being selected by

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huge number

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huge numbers

a huge number

than countries where these spots are missing. Its modern era people earning has manifold so much that they can afford to trip countries for holidays and get rid of materialistic life temporarily and leading king size life.

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generates the revenue of the

country

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and share in

economy

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the economy

is significant and assisting in

stabilize

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stabilizing

the economy even people of native

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lively hood depends upon the service and support which they provides to

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. Disadvantages of

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is there like its disturbs the harmony of any

country

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if miscreants / drug peddler enters into

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having past background awash with boisterousness ,obviously he would malign the sacrosanct environment of that

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by indulging in illicit activities and would persuade gullible locals to join him for earning quick money so locals arbitrarily will have hand in glove in crime for the sake of money,

secondly

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disease carriage, generally conflagration of deadly disease in any countries are spread by foreigners which proves deadly and full of menace herein medical check up procedure must be followed up sincerely. So at

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tourism

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engulfing more advantages than disadvantages because of pervasive reasons and must be promoted.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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