Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does Tourism bring more advantages and disadvantages to a country ?

I fully consent that
tourism
for any
country
is advantageous.
Tourism
can be described in a way that influx of people to other countries for viewing the beauty and speciality of destination countries. Enthralled with the iconic view, gratified thoroughly in engrossing themselves in
such beautiful location
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such a beautiful location
, it provides an opportunity
to
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for
tourist
to grasp the culture and imbibed the positivity pervaded in the nature. Countries are investing heavily to develop
tourist
hotspot and building infrastructure to be hotbed
for
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of
tourist
and making eye catching spot for attracting them. Many countries
major
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majored
are majoring
revenue coming up from
tourism
dept
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Dept
dept.
, adopting
plan
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plans
to create
heavenly environment
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a heavenly environment
is the most important aspects the
region
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regional
head. Beholding beauties and soothing nature in any
countries apparently
Accept comma addition
countries, apparently
entice
tourist
to reserve the spot. Countries must keep
an
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a
birds eye view on security of
tourist
as mayhem, or untoward incident with them would be malicious and detrimental for
next visit
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the next visit
of that
tourist
instead
would fan out the information to other colleagues do not plan to visit the
country
where they faced humiliation and felt unsecured. Countries having historical places are being selected by
tourist
in
huge number
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huge numbers
a huge number
than countries where these spots are missing. Its modern era people earning has manifold so much that they can afford to trip countries for holidays and get rid of materialistic life temporarily and leading king size life.
Tourism
generates the revenue of the
country
and share in
economy
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the economy
is significant and assisting in
stabilize
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stabilizing
the economy even people of native
country
lively hood depends upon the service and support which they provides to
tourist
. Disadvantages of
tourism
is there like its disturbs the harmony of any
country
if miscreants / drug peddler enters into
country
having past background awash with boisterousness ,obviously he would malign the sacrosanct environment of that
country
by indulging in illicit activities and would persuade gullible locals to join him for earning quick money so locals arbitrarily will have hand in glove in crime for the sake of money,
secondly
disease carriage, generally conflagration of deadly disease in any countries are spread by foreigners which proves deadly and full of menace herein medical check up procedure must be followed up sincerely. So at
last
tourism
engulfing more advantages than disadvantages because of pervasive reasons and must be promoted.
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