There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir/Ma’am,
I am one of the loyal customers of SBS Transit and always travel with its buses and trains. I am writing
this
letter to you to report some issues that I have in a couple of weeks ago.
Every morning, I take bus
856 in front of my block 209 to Woodlands Bus
Interchange. Last
two weeks ago, the bus
reached to
my Change preposition
apply
bus
stop ten minutes late even though the bus
arrival application
showed that it was coming. However
, I understood that there might be some traffic on the way but it did not happen just for one day. The bus
kept arriving late the next
morings
which was really inconvenient for me. My office hour starts at 8.30 AM normally and I reached at 9.30 AM due to Correct your spelling
morning
mornings
late
arrival of the Correct article usage
the late
bus
. Another problem is the bus
arrival application
to check the buses status online. I noticed that this
application
does not reflect the real time
Add a hyphen
real-time
bus
coming updates,
so that I could not trust the Remove the comma
apply
application
status no matter what time the bus
is coming.
I would like SBS company to take actions
on these problems and make sure that the buses run the exact time without getting late and an Fix the agreement mistake
action
application
shows the correct information for customers as well.
I hope to hear from you once you receive this
letter and feel free to contact me if you need any further
information.
Yours faithfully,
Cass OoSubmitted by eindraoo on
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