There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir/Ma’am, I am one of the loyal customers of SBS Transit and always travel with its buses and trains. I am writing
this
letter to you to report some issues that I have in a couple of weeks ago. Every morning, I take
bus
856 in front of my block 209 to Woodlands
Bus
Interchange.
Last
two weeks ago, the
bus
reached
to
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my
bus
stop ten minutes late even though the
bus
arrival
application
showed that it was coming.
However
, I understood that there might be some traffic on the way but it did not happen just for one day. The
bus
kept arriving late the
next
morings
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morning
mornings
which was really inconvenient for me. My office hour starts at 8.30 AM normally and I reached at 9.30 AM due to
late
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the late
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arrival of the
bus
. Another problem is the
bus
arrival
application
to check the buses status online. I noticed that
this
application
does not reflect the
real time
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bus
coming updates
,
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so that I could not trust the
application
status no matter what time the
bus
is coming. I would like SBS company to take
actions
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on these problems and make sure that the buses run the exact time without getting late and an
application
shows the correct information for customers as well. I hope to hear from you once you receive
this
letter and feel free to contact me if you need any
further
information. Yours faithfully, Cass Oo
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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