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The mass media including TV, Radio and Newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?

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In
this
epoc
a period marked by distinctive character or reckoned from a fixed point or event
epoch
epic
 of modern civilization, telecommunication media and print media broadcasting information plays a vital role in forming or changing opinion of its spectators. Everyone wants to be aware about the changes in term of political
,
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,
 economical, or social milieu and
ctitizens
a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizens
 of all nations want to be cognizant about the impact these changes are bringing across the globe.
Firstly
, print media or digital media
is supplying
Suggestion
are supplying
 abundant data and information to its end users and at times control the decision making.
For example
, it was noted that during the USA government
formulation general
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formulation, general
 assembly election, a social media
plateform
a raised horizontal surface
platform
platforms
 supported in changing the verdict of its users, potentially an electoral suffrage towards one political party.
Secondly
, media
plays
Suggestion
play
 an important role in constructing the society or destructing it.As, during the social uproar or communal turbulence media can act as an extinguisher to douse the communal fire ignited among communities or can act as a catalyst by representing fake news and
further
 encouraging communal commotion. To put it in a nutshell, I pen
down saying
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down, saying
 that
media
Suggestion
the media
 is a mirror of society and must reflect the precision image for building the better living world.
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