There has been a dramatic growth in the number of people studying at universities in the last few decades. While some people see this as a positive trend which raises the general level of education within the community, others fear that it is lowering the quality of education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the increase in student numbers at university? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In
past few decades there
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the past few decades, there
the past few decades there
has been increasing in a large amount of people trends to study at universities. Some people
believes
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believe
that
this
phenomenon has a positive impact to
raises
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raise
the general level of
education
within the society, where some others argue that there is a risk of the
quality
of
education
.
This
easy
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easement
will look at the merits and demerits of the increasing trend of
university
studies. Undoubtedly, Increasing
number
of pupils are enrolling at
university
is a positive sign for the society or as
whole nation
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a whole nation
the whole nation
.
Firstly
, if people are being educated
then
they can contribute to the development of the country.
For example
: Singapore
become
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becomes
developed country rapidly as their literacy rate is 99%.
On the other hand
, Educated people can receive good job and they can help their family. In recent, Survey conducted on under
develop
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developed
countries of
south
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South
Asia on " Life of the Family" illustrated that 85% of the people of those countries are depend on the Job. So,
this
is a very positive that the people are getting towards to the
university
for their higher
education
.
Nevertheless
, Augmentation of the huge
number
of the
student
at
university
education
has some negative aspects.
Firstly
, entering
number
of
student
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students
at universities
are questioning
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is questioning
the
quality
of
education
as there are many private universities are established.
Secondly
, most of the universities are not considering the
quality
of the
student
, only doing business.
For instance
: Many universities are asking high tuition fees
from
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for
student
and providing certificates.
On the other hand
,
number
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a number
of students are
increasing but
Accept comma addition
increasing, but
the infrastructure of the universities
are not developing
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is not developing
, so it is very difficult for the lecturer to take care of huge amount of students at a time.
In addition
, A research
carry
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carries
out on the students of
university
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the university
about " the
quality
of
education
and
number
of Students" its shown that 88% of students are dissatisfied with the size of classes. In conclusion, Growing
trends
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trend
of the students entering in the
university
is
positive but
Accept comma addition
positive, but
we should not compromise the
quality
of
education
. So the advantages of
growing
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the growing number
a growing number
number
of people entering at universities
are far outweigh
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far outweigh
have far outweighed
the disadvantages.

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