Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have

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unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

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for the children to utilize their leisure

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. While some masses believe that

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ought to promote those tasks, which involve groups, I agree with those who consider that it is better for them to remain introvert. In the following paragraphs, I shall

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some arguments to support my view. On the one hand, there are several reasons why people support

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are working

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a group

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. To commence, Individuals learn about the team management skills when they cooperate with others

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find a great deal of ideas about how to lead. Another obvious advantage is that it is the best

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to have deep a understanding of the communication skills.

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, it gives an overall view that the cooperation instills a huge variety of skills in adolescents.

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, some proponents propose that it is much more beneficial to remain alone and find different ways to use

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agree. In the

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place, It is a critical

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to avoid peer pressure and get knowledge of a

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management to complete crucial tasks. For

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an item of information that is typical of a class or group

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students'

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completion of the

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preparatory school work done outside school (especially at home)

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is indispensable.

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, it is an

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being effective without wasting time or effort or expense

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inefficient

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to discover your own talent

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an occurrence of something

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a lot

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and think alone to

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make or cause to be or to become

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and present ideas.

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, it seems to me that, it is a crucial thing to busy yourself without involving others to

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to gain with effort

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success in life. In conclusion,

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people may vary in their opinions, I think that giving

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to your self is a key to enhance the creativity in the children.