As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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The majority of the men and women spend a large part of their adult life at their office,
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satisfaction is a crucial factor of individual wellbeing. For most of the peoples' money is the main factor of their satisfaction and it is quite unrealistic to have an expectation of a
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in
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competitive world. One of the main factors for most people is money.
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to say that they have to run their houses, they have some dependent on their shoulder whom they who to feed. They have to pay their bills as well. So, when a person has got enough money from their
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they are quite satisfied with their
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, a recent report of the Asian Times concluded that 70% of houses in South Asia have only one breadwinner in their whole family, and the whole family is dependent on their salary to pay their bills and do other things. In
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competitive world, it is quite unrealistic to have an expectation of a
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, most of the graduate students think that they would be able to get their
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just after their graduation. When they enter into real market,
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they realize how difficult is to find a
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that they have expected, especially in developing countries.
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, a recent report suggested that only 10% of people who were fortunate enough to find the
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they had expected during their graduation in India. In conclusion, the majority of the people get satisfied with their
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if they are paid enough wages to pay their bills and are able to do purchase necessary things in their life and to get a
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after graduation is quite unrealistic to think.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job satisfaction
  • wellbeing
  • contribute
  • meaningful work
  • work-life balance
  • career progression
  • workplace environment
  • recognition
  • constructive feedback
  • compensation
  • benefits
  • job security
  • autonomy
  • skills match
  • interests match
  • variety
  • challenge
  • economic conditions
  • labor market
  • individual expectations
  • job role
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