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Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. What is your opinion

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Telling the
truth
 can sometimes be difficult. While most people prefer to free their minds by telling the
truth
, others find it difficult to say the
truth
.
This
 essay will discuss why I completely agree that it is preferable to tell the
truth
.
Truth
 is a thing of integrity and should be taken
seriouly
in a serious manner
seriously
. There is a saying that
truth
 sets the mind and heart free. It can
also
 help free people that
has been captured
Suggestion
have been captured
 and needs the
truth
 from a witness to set them free. There has been cases where people have
said
express in words
told
 the
truth
 without thinking of the implications and were instantly set free. Saying the
truth not
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truth, not
 only sets the person
free but
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free, but
also
 sets people around that person free. It could be sometimes difficult to
say
express in words
tell
 the
truth
. While, there can be situations where
lieing
the deliberate act of deviating from the truth
lying
 than saying the
truth
 pays.
This
 is because, in most
occassions
something you have to do
occasions
locations
occupations
, saying the
truth
 has lead people to an early grave. There is a recent trending news of a woman that was convicted and jailed for about ten years and after several trials, she could not say the
truth
 because
hers
of a female
her
 life was at stake. In most cases, people tend to
drawback
Suggestion
draw back
 from
saing
having vision, not blind
seeing
saying
sin
 the
truth
 because they are protecting a loved one. In conclusion,
this
 essay discussed why
saying
disclosing unintentionally
telling
 the
truth
 will set the person and
peopler
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 around free, it
also
elaborted
developed or executed with care and in minute detail
elaborated
 on the fact that saying the
truth
 can sometimes be difficult
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
 someone or something precious might suffer from that
truth
. In my opinion, I completely believe that saying the
truth
 can set everyone free.

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