Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays people focusing on being a famous person they intend to spread their reputation around them.But there are some people who have a strong feelings on their argument.I think being a
celebrity
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, has to face many problems as well as can pleasure many facilities.Both
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views
will be discussed before drawing a reasonable conclusion. On the one hand
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a substantial number of people who are they spend their entire
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to be
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celebrity
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a celebrity
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place
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it can be said that
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can earn a huge amount of
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money, which
they are able to buy all the amenities of
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not only they can buy luxury apartments in a posh
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area, but
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they can visit an exclusive
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restaurant
where general people do not have any access.
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general
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people, especially
young generation always attempt to follow them
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as their hairstyle
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dress up and way of speaking.For these celebrities feel proud.
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even though there are no shortcomings in their
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they
can not
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move like an ordinary
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person
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being a
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sometimes it may have influence in their
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to lead astray.
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they become an enemy of the people as well as the
country
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Aadil Khan was the famous hero across the
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after passing two years as a successful hero
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he engaged himself
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as actions which are really detrimental for
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country
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the country
and he left the
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forever.
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most of the time well-known persons get involved themselves with immoral activities. To conclude
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I consider that
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despite
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has some benefits and drawbacks
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they should not go far away from the right path.
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they have to be honest as well as try to keep
in balance of their
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balance of their
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Public scrutiny
  • Intrusive
  • Endorsements
  • Sponsorships
  • Financial security
  • High-profile collaborations
  • Social influence
  • Philanthropic efforts
  • Trust issues
  • Mental health challenges
  • Substance abuse
  • Pressures of celebrity
  • Expectations
  • Disconnect from reality
  • Normalcy
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