You live in a house near a park. Recently, a lot of teenagers have been meeting in the park at night. They are very noisy. Write an email to the local government in about 250 words. Your email should do the following things: • Provide information about where you live. • Explain the problem and how it affects your life. • Suggest a way to solve the problem.

I'm writing to you, in order to express my concerns and make you aware, on series of disturbing incidents that took place at the night
time
in the Edmonton
city
park
. My house is located adjoining the
city
park
and I've been residing here for
last
10 years. Totaling, 25 - 30 families residing in the
park
's vicinity. Recently, we have been disturbed by a group of teenagers who are arriving to the
park
after sunset and partying till dawn in the
city
park
. They are using sound equipment which amplify the music to a loud noise and it is disturbing to our lifestyle, especially at night
time
when we sleep. Most of our community members work in the
city
, in day jobs and they certainly need adequate rest at the night
time
. Not to mention the children who are studying at late after school, who
also
require pin drop silence for better concentration. If I may suggest, having
park
entry
time
and a closing
time
may resolve
this
issue, and if the
city
council could consider of appointing designated officer for the
park
, it may certainly reduce the number of
such
incidents. I trust that you would look at
this
issue at your earliest possible and expects a speedy solution.
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