some people believe that children are given to much free time. they feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?

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Free
time
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is a leisure
time
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given to
some one
a human being
someone
in which he/she can practice any of his hobbies. Due to
rapid advancement
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the rapid advancement
in technology
,
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,
now a days so
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nowadays, so
nowadays so
much leisure
time
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is given to kids.
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essay will argue whether
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time
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should be used to do school homework or should be
spend
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spent
in
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on
hobbies. When equipments are doing most of
houshold works
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the household work
household works
household work
houshold work
like washing
,
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,
cleaning
,
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,
dusting and cooking, parents give more free
time
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to their kids. Now a days it's become
fashion
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a fashion
the fashion
for youngster not to help in household works, they have sufficient
time
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after school or college.
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time
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shold
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
be used for doing
homewoks
preparatory school work done outside school (especially at home)
homework
and assignments as
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is the
first
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priority after all. Since
this
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type of worksheets
improve
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improves
the basics and help
in
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with
lon
primarily temporal sense; being or indicating a relatively great or greater than average duration or passage of time or a duration as specified
long
term.
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it is good to spend
time
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with academic books, but some
time
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should be spend
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should be spent
on hobbies
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, as the hobbies open a new direction to our career.
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extra-
curicullar
of or relating to an academic course of study
curricular
activities can have long benefits like help in
bring
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bringing
concentration,
coorporation
a business firm whose articles of incorporation have been approved in some state
corporation
, team
sprit
the vital principle or animating force within living things
spirit
etc. Kids can take
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kind of interest as a long
time
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carrer
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
. Even if academic education provides base
to
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for
kids, leisure
time
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hobbies help in
overall development
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the overall development
. So spare
time
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should be properly
invest
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invested
in all interest related activities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unstructured free time
  • creativity
  • mental health development
  • extracurricular activities
  • well-rounded development
  • sports
  • arts
  • social skills
  • family time
  • emotional growth
  • relationship building
  • rest and leisure
  • academic performance
  • burnout
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