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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#english #language #country
The
first
 pie chart
illustrate
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illustrates
using
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the use
use
uses
 of
energy
 in different household manners. We can see from the charts,
greatest percentage
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the greatest percentage
 of using
energy
 belong to heating
.
Accept space
.
besides
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Besides
, The water heating accounted for the emission of
Greenhouse
 Gas.
However
, using of
energy
 and
Greenhouse
 Gas which is emitted for cooling is in
the lowest
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the lower
the low
 range.
On the other hand
, The amount of
energy
usage
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used
 for heating is more than
Greenhouse
 Gas based on it. The two pie charts compare the household
energy
 usage and
Greenhouse
 Gas for refrigeration
sector which
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sector, which
 is 7 percent and 14 percent
relatively
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relative
. Other Household appliances consume 15%
energy
 which there is
significant change
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a significant change
 in percentage of Gas emission based on. The consumption of
energy
 for lightening is more than cooling same as the
Greenhouse
 Gas chart.
Therefore
, all of
features
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the features
 which investigated for
energy
 usage have upward
trending
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trended
 in
Greenhouse
 Gas which is related to them except heating had dropped from 42% to 15%.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersion
  • fluency
  • advanced
  • communicate
  • accommodate
  • exposure
  • cultural understanding
  • native speakers
  • educational institutions
  • resources
  • diverse
  • globalized
  • interact
  • self-study
  • online courses
  • tutors
  • language exchange
  • books
  • videos
  • podcasts
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • conversation partners
  • progress
  • motivated
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