Houses are essential for people. Some argue that governments should offer free houses for people who can not afford to pay for it. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.

House
Suggestion
A house
which we make homes by building it staying in it is most important part and one of
basic requirement
Suggestion
the basic requirement
of our life. I strongly agree with
this
that families or people who
dont
do not
don't
have enough money or homeless government should take
this
in consideration provide them with home so they can leave
there
of them or themselves
their
life peacefully because people who
donot
Suggestion
do not
have houses leave on roads and life is miserable. On humanity grounds as to boost the economy of
development
Suggestion
developing
country government should provide
house
Suggestion
housing
. There are few people who are low income group and
dont
do not
don't
earn enough to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
all daily needs
such
category
Suggestion
categories
of population should be identified and allotted houses.

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