Houses are essential for people. Some argue that governments should offer free houses for people who can not afford to pay for it. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.

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House

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A house

which we make homes by building it staying in it is most important part and one of

basic requirement

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the basic requirement

of our life. I strongly agree with

this

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that families or people who

dont

do not

don't

have enough money or homeless government should take

this

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in consideration provide them with home so they can leave

there

of them or themselves

their

life peacefully because people who

donot

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do not

have houses leave on roads and life is miserable. On humanity grounds as to boost the economy of

development

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developing

country government should provide

house

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housing

. There are few people who are low income group and

dont

do not

don't

earn enough to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

all daily needs

such

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

112 words

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Houses are essential for people. Some argue that governments should offer free houses for people who can not afford to pay for it. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Nowadays, more and more people move to live in big cities. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Are you familiar with any of Sault Ste. Marie’s recreational, cultural, or lifestyle and if so, please provide details.

Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women.

With growing population in cities, more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Is it a positive or negative development?