Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
At Present, a lot of students are making a choice to attend the
university
for various reasons. While some people think that it would be increased
the Suggestion
increasing
job
prospects in future
, others think that it Suggestion
the future
is not only help
to individual in the Suggestion
has not only helped
is not only helping
job
aspects but also
it has a
enormous other profits to individual and Suggestion
an
society
. This
essay will examine the both side
of opinions.
On the one hand, Suggestion
sides
some of believe that
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some believe that
university
education
is one of the best way
to ensure the Suggestion
ways
job
opportunity in future
. Suggestion
the future
This
is because of that
is it
could help to develop the knowledge and skills in order to compete the Accept comma addition
is, it
job
markets in future. Further
, in this
competitive world ,
most employers would like to recruit the graduate due to their marketable and attractive presence. Accept space
,
Also
, Employers believe that graduates have the potential to do the work in better
way. Suggestion
the best
Therefore
, those reasons ,
it is obvious that Accept space
,
university
education
impose the greater impact in getting jobs.
On the other hand
, others believe that while this
kind of higher studies are beneficial to individual’s
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an individual’s growth
growth
,
it has advantages to Accept space
,
society
also
.
In detail, Accept space
.
university
education
, in addition
to the academic skills and knowledge, it could enhance the other skills too. For instance
, social skills, communication skills ,
time management skills and so on more. Those skills Accept space
,
are positively impact
the person's Suggestion
are positively impacting
have positively impacted
growth
. In other word, it could help to make a responsible person in the community. Further
, graduates will significantly contribute the economic
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contribute to the economic
growth
of the society
once they graduated from university
. Thus
, on the whole, university
education
has involved notably
in individual and Accept comma addition
involved, notably
society
’s growth
.
In conclusion, although
university
education
is markedly rise
the Suggestion
has markedly risen
job
prospects by meeting the employers
needsSuggestion
employer
employer's
,
it has other varies benefits towards the development of people and Accept space
,
society
. Therefore
. I strongly believe that university
education
is not only increasing the probability of getting job but
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a job, but
a job but
the job but
also
it plays a major role in enrichment of people and society
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