In recent year, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the past couple of decades,
rapid surge
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a rapid surge
in the technology has revolutionized the way we consume literature. Some experts
postulates
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postulate
that there is an increasing trend towards reading e-books compared to
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books.
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essay will explain why I believe the disadvantages of reading
paper
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books are far outweighed by the positives when compared to e-books. Considering
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the
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characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negatives
of
paper
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books, the most important
one
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is that to produce
paper
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, often many trees are cut down and deforestation has become a global issue. For an instance, a recent article published by National Geography stated that, deforestation alone has contributed to over 35%
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of
global warming.
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, longevity is an issue with the
paper
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format.
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means, once a hard
copy
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is purchased,
one
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has to properly maintain the same in order to preserve it for a longer time.
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, there is no raw material required to produce an e-
copy
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and along with that it can be
archieved
to gain with effort
achieved
archived
for centuries as a virtual
copy
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consumes very little space with zero maintenance. The main advantage of e-books is that multiple books can be
possessd
subjected to a special process or treatment
processed
at any given point of time without consuming any physical space. For an example, while travelling,
one
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carry
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carries
an e-book reader like kindle or a
pendrive
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pen drive
which stores hundreds of books which offers a benefit of reading multiple books simultaneously.
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,
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can appreciate some more additional benefits that are offered by
virtual
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virtual copies
a virtual copy
copy
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of any book. To illustrate, a reader can
heighligh
move into the foreground to make more visible or prominent
highlight
any word
that is
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difficult to understand and look for a synonym or directly
copy
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required data and use it for projects and/or presentations etc.
In contrast
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to
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, books in the
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format
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need
a storage unit and there is very little
one
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can gain from just reading the hard
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of a book. To conclude, there is no doubt that advantages of e-books like helping in reducing the
deforastration
the state of being clear of trees
deforestation
, use of minimal storage space and flexibility for
archieval
a depository containing historical records and documents
archive
for multiple years has encouraged more and more readers to transition from reading a hard
copy
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to use a virtual
copy
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of various books.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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