Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that it is better to choose people always having the same
opinion
as friends, while others think that friends should sometimes disagree too.
Although
restricting friendships
to only with people having similar views helps
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helps only with people having similar views
to only with people having similar views helps
to avoid
stress
, I believe that keeping friends who sometimes having a different
opinion
helps to develop knowledge. On the one hand, restricting people to find friends with
same
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the same opinion
opinion
avoids
stress
buildup
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build up
.
That is
to say that, if one's friend
always disagree
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always disagrees
, that will lead to conflict after
certain period
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a certain period
and even lead to the loss of friendship. Eventually,
stress
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the stress
will develop from the
conflic
an open clash between two opposing groups (or individuals)
conflict
, and
as a result
, it affects the mental health of the person.
For example
, a recent study conducted by WHO revealed that 35% of
stress
related illnesses emerged out of arguments
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
social relationships.
However
, I disagree
vith
expresses the means used
with
this
view
due to the reasons outlined in the following paragraph.
On the other hand
, allowing friends sometimes having an opposite
view
imparts knowledge improvement.
This
is because, if a friend of someone disagrees with an argument put
forwarded
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forward
by him, he gets a chance to think about the flip side of the matter.
This
gives a chance for a healthy discussion
untill
up to, before the time
until
finding out the positives and negatives of both the
view points
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoints
, and
as a result
, their insight on the topic increases.
For example
, a recent study by Cambridge University revealed that 30% of a person's general
knowldge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
has been achieved during his social life through sharing information among friends.
Hence
, I agree with
this
view
as it has real benefits for both the parties. In conclusion, while people with similar
opinion
avoids
stress
development, I think that arguments with friends helps a person with knowledge
develepment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • harmonious
  • stress-free
  • disagreements
  • conflicts
  • reinforce
  • validate
  • comforting
  • reassuring
  • broaden your understanding
  • perspectives
  • challenge intellectually
  • think critically
  • personal growth
  • development
  • healthy debates
  • communication skills
  • mutual respect
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