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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Books are always considered as one of the best sources of knowledge. Due to the entry of modern technology, the new
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 of books
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has been taking
 place ahead like e-books. In
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 essay we will argue about the advantages and disadvantages of people's incline towards an online mode of education/knowledge. While technology advancement is giving us different sources of learning, now people have so many online options to read and educate themselves. Previously only manual books were the only source of education, but now the most of the books are available in electronic
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. These e-books are cheaper to manual, easy to carry and
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 not required any kind of space in our house. These books can be downloaded in our Personal computers or mobiles. So now a days more readers are obtaining for
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 kind of
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the iconic form
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 the online
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 of work is making its way to modern readers, still some prefer the manual one. Reason behind
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 preference is manual books give them a kind of satisfaction which they don't get by reading e-books, apart from that spending more time in front of a computer screen can harm our eyes but
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 not possible with paper books. Every
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 has its two sides, on the one hand electronic forms come with some advantage and the other hand with some disadvantage. I completely agree that the benefits are more pleasing than the harms and it is good to change with the pace of modernization. Every technology come with some imperfection, so we can try to focus on positive
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